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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey ^^ This chapter is very good even after you didn\'t write in a month. I enjoyed reading it.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. The Ash and May pairing works out great
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again this was really good, I would love to do those things with him!! ^.^
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shrugs* I likey. Its hot and brief. Its porn.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.. I dont really know any scenes, but how about something to build on their relationship on an emotional level? Iono, the sex is hot, but stuff like that never really lasts that long.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice lemon but couldnt you use the orignal english names
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great scene, but you might seriously think about more sex positions or maybe add another girl, and it doesn\'t have to be Misty...
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I think that it would be great to read more stories of this pair. Please write more for this pair.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe...another great chapter. Please continue with this. *begs* XD It is too wonderful.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another good chapter! What a nice thing to wake up and read. Hehe. Breakfast of champions. LOL