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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg...this is soo wonderful. I loved this story very much. You wrote a very good lemon. I can\'t wait to read some more.
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Something to think about if you plan on continuing this story. Include some minor bondage such as Haruka tying Satoshi\'s wrists with silk scarfs and having her way with him or vice versa. Hope that provides some inspiration. Either way, excellent job.
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was also pretty hot! If you still need any ideas, think about that anal sex, or maybe make them have a threesome
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Shudders* Reading this makes me feel like I need a shower >^.^< Once again you seem to have complete control of my sences. Hehe This was very good!
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good, if your looking for ideas. Why not pair Satoshi/Ash with another female? Yes, I hate Misty with a passion too, but there are many girls that you can include besides Haruka/May. A possible new female gym leader maybe.
If not, Satoshi and Haruka could participate in a team battle with their Bulbsaurs. This somehow ending up in disaster in the long run.
If not, Satoshi and Haruka could participate in a team battle with their Bulbsaurs. This somehow ending up in disaster in the long run.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I\'m glad that there\'s a Ash/May lemon made! XD You made my day!
I ask for more! A LOT MORE!
I ask for more! A LOT MORE!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No I don\'t think so. XD Notice how this is m/f? Plus I hate Misty with a passion.
Also no anal, that does nothing for females so I am not including it.
Also no anal, that does nothing for females so I am not including it.
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t think I was gonna get through reading this without falling into a euphoric state of rapture.. This was really good. Oh and you used my fantasy too! *Glomps*
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... If u need ideas, try making them do anal sex, and maybe in a much later chapter, u can have May meet Misty and add a Yuri scene. Just a thought.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Finally! I love story\'s of Ash and May.. I am totally attracted to him too.. Oh the things I would do to that man.. I think you are doing a great job.. Keep it up! ^.^