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schedule
December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok your description is pretty good but you, have to stop using "he" so much and try to describe whats going through her and his head and what they're feeling. for a first time lemon it's still good though
schedule
July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY SIS I LUV IT GREAT JOB 100,000,000,000,000,000,000 STARS
OR MORE I ABSOULTLY LUVED IT GIVE ME GOOD REVIEWS WHEN I RITE
OR MORE I ABSOULTLY LUVED IT GIVE ME GOOD REVIEWS WHEN I RITE