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ryoma all da way, im in love with sexy ryoma xD
besides, it's obviously american=ryoma, english=ryoma, unless u make it fuji... which is still good xDD

Ummm make it Tez. He's pretty gay too. Hell sweetheart, they're all really gay. But he's the only one on Seigaku who doesn't have a good pairing. Momo/Ryoma, Inui/Kaidoh, Fuji/Kawamura, Eiji/Oishi FOREVER! :3

I think its Ryoma because hes the only one from America that I can think of, and you said it was a Regular so that\'s my guess.

It\'s good. The story is certainly has caught my attention. AND you spaced your story. Thank you.
It makes it much easier for the reader. I look forward to your update.

These are some things that I thought I\'d comment on.
Ryuzabi/Ryuuzaki. Is that supposed to be Sakuno? If so, just use Sakuno.
It\'s easier and faster to type for you and Tenipuri fans will know instantly who she is.
I don\'t know why, but other authors use \'fshuuu\' when Kaidoh does his hissing.

Why don\'t you try Mediaminer.org? I think you may be confusing CYOA with self-insertion.
I\'m sure that self-insertion is allowed because they have it under fanfic type.
But if you are still hesitant, just change the you to a name, but with that you have to have background on the person.

I enjoyed your story and I am patiently waiting for the next update. Ja ne!

i think the story is really cool so far and i can\'t wait to find out who the secret admirer is. please update soon cuz i want to know what the next clue is.

I really like your story so far its very Original.

You got me hooked cause now I HAVE to find out who sent the letter or else I\'ll go CRAZY

.....well crazier then I already am and that\'s not going to be a pretty sight if you ask me.

Keep up the awsome job and UPDATE!!!! or face the wrath of....my Hobo friend Lelo. =^__^=

Huggies

the slightly demented

-Chachi-chan

Neat idea and story. I love Prince of Tennis aka POT. I can\'t wait for the next clue so I can found out who my secret admirer is. Okay well got to go keep up the good work can\'t wait for the next chapter ^-^ Bye

You updated kinda fast. I didn\'t think you would update for another 3 weeks or something. That\'s good thing. I completely forgot about the red being in their attire. You crossed out some people. So it isn\'t Osihi, Eiji, Taka, Momo, or Inui for sure. Kaidoh, Ryoma, Fuji, and Tezuka are left. This is so Fuji. So I\'m putting all my life savings on Fuji. (My lifesavings isn\'t much just 2 dollars and some lint.) I\'m so happy that you updated. I\'m looking forward to your next update and clue.

I like it. It\'s a fresh breath of air because there are nothing but yaoi stories here. Which are cool ,but a change isn\'t bad. I look forward to your next update.