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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Four: I suppose I should feel sorry for Matt. But like I said I don't really care for him as a character, so... I'M GLAD HE WALKED OUT ON HER!!! If his sex could compare to Tai's then maybe his girlfriend wouldn't have to fantasize about Tai!!!
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Five: *sigs* I GUESS Matt had to get a little *revenge* for Tai making is now EX girlfriend come... And a little Junato never hurts anyone!!! *yes I'm weird*
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is easily the best Digi-hentai I've read. I've read this story a million times and I'm still not tired of it! I've enjoyed For Love of Realiability also, even though I'm a die-hard Mimato fan! I'm sadden to know that you won't write anymore digi-fics. You're really good at them!
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that although I haven't read that much fanfiction, especially adult fanfiction, this is the best fan fic I can remember reading. The story is realistic without breaking out of the established world. The players are all in character and their internal conflicts are explored beautifully.
One thing that really interested me is that despite the fact that i know practically nothing about the original Japanese version of the show and have not seen much of the dub in a long time I heard the lines in my mind. I don't know if it was intentional or if you just happened to do it by accident or if it was subconscious or anything but you managed to somehow make each line fit with the voice patterns of the dub without hurting the story's flow at all.
For a while I was actually almost mad at you when I found out Yamato cheated on Sora because I always felt that by the time Digimon 02 takes place he's become such a virtuous character, just like you portrayed him in the early chapters. It felt wrong that he'd do that, and that there was such an easy way to get out of it. I was honestly kind of annoyed at you for "ruining" this almost flawless story. But I admit that I'm ashamed of myself because that bit in, what I beleive was, chapter 7 made up for it in full. You really got the way that his loner, badboy mentality from the early days of the show has assimilated into the person he is now. And while I admit that I didn't always appreciate his character (I had a brief stint of interest in his character near the end of the first season when they gave him all that good and evil character growth but other than that I was a Tai fan through and through), I can't help but feel like you got him best of all.
On the whole, it's a magnificent story. I'm sure I'm forgetting something but you probably think that I'm just rambling now and I suppose I am so I'll spare you and end it here. In closing, good work.
One thing that really interested me is that despite the fact that i know practically nothing about the original Japanese version of the show and have not seen much of the dub in a long time I heard the lines in my mind. I don't know if it was intentional or if you just happened to do it by accident or if it was subconscious or anything but you managed to somehow make each line fit with the voice patterns of the dub without hurting the story's flow at all.
For a while I was actually almost mad at you when I found out Yamato cheated on Sora because I always felt that by the time Digimon 02 takes place he's become such a virtuous character, just like you portrayed him in the early chapters. It felt wrong that he'd do that, and that there was such an easy way to get out of it. I was honestly kind of annoyed at you for "ruining" this almost flawless story. But I admit that I'm ashamed of myself because that bit in, what I beleive was, chapter 7 made up for it in full. You really got the way that his loner, badboy mentality from the early days of the show has assimilated into the person he is now. And while I admit that I didn't always appreciate his character (I had a brief stint of interest in his character near the end of the first season when they gave him all that good and evil character growth but other than that I was a Tai fan through and through), I can't help but feel like you got him best of all.
On the whole, it's a magnificent story. I'm sure I'm forgetting something but you probably think that I'm just rambling now and I suppose I am so I'll spare you and end it here. In closing, good work.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. I hope you post a new story soon. Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! THAT WAS THE BEST FIC I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!! XD
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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an awesome story. I\'m surprised, since I never really liked Sora. But I was curious about this story and Im really blown away. Thank you so much! I\'m going to have to read more of your work now.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say these are pretty good ("Something Missing" and "For love of Reliability". Very plausible pairings. Situations plausible enough to be believable and implausible enough to be interesting. I thought it was very well written (although it's to "bawl one's eyes out" not to "ball one's eyes out"). Anyway, I will be certainly be watching intently if more updates are to come (which I do hope there will be).
Oh, and one more thing - it might be a good idea to have the same kind of descriptive detail in "Something Missing" and "For Love of Reliability", especially with the main characters. Taichi was wonderfully depicted (although a numeric height and, perhaps, a numeric... ehrm... size would have been interesting ô_ô) although I couldn't say the same for Mimi, Sora and especially Jyou (who would have been interesting to describe - has he changed physically, is there something in him now that physically attracts Mimi... perhaps he's actually up there with Taichi on ~that~ department?). Just a thought. If these stories are to remain unfinished, maybe I could have these much sought after addenda through e-mail... just to complete the reading experience ô_ô.
Oh, and one more thing - it might be a good idea to have the same kind of descriptive detail in "Something Missing" and "For Love of Reliability", especially with the main characters. Taichi was wonderfully depicted (although a numeric height and, perhaps, a numeric... ehrm... size would have been interesting ô_ô) although I couldn't say the same for Mimi, Sora and especially Jyou (who would have been interesting to describe - has he changed physically, is there something in him now that physically attracts Mimi... perhaps he's actually up there with Taichi on ~that~ department?). Just a thought. If these stories are to remain unfinished, maybe I could have these much sought after addenda through e-mail... just to complete the reading experience ô_ô.
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gosh this was sooo beautiful!
i\'m so happy that sora, yama and tai were still friends after all...
i got goosebumbs when yamato told sora, that he wouldn\'t fight tai... it was amazing written!
i also liked the thing between jyou and mimi... they\'re really cute together!
thanks for writing such a great story!
i\'m so happy that sora, yama and tai were still friends after all...
i got goosebumbs when yamato told sora, that he wouldn\'t fight tai... it was amazing written!
i also liked the thing between jyou and mimi... they\'re really cute together!
thanks for writing such a great story!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
Just, wow.
I really, really enjoy this story greatly. It had all the things I look for in a fanfic. I\'m a huge Digimon fan (season 1 and 2 only, though) and my favorite pairing as always been Taichi/Sora. You wrote this beauitifully and I\'m sort of mad at myself for just now finding this great piece of work. Seriously. I can not thank you enough for posting this. It was a very nice way to start my Monday morning. Now I go start my day with a smile on my face. Thanks again.
Just, wow.
I really, really enjoy this story greatly. It had all the things I look for in a fanfic. I\'m a huge Digimon fan (season 1 and 2 only, though) and my favorite pairing as always been Taichi/Sora. You wrote this beauitifully and I\'m sort of mad at myself for just now finding this great piece of work. Seriously. I can not thank you enough for posting this. It was a very nice way to start my Monday morning. Now I go start my day with a smile on my face. Thanks again.