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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this one. =) Well structured and all that. There isn\'t enough good Digimon lemon around.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear God, this is full-blown erotica. It has humour, it has people biting nipples. Its all very good. Plus you\'ve nailed one of the few reasons a girl would leave their bf for another, a larger manhood.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please don\'t make me beg for a sequel! The thought of a sequel with Jyou and Mimi may gross you out, but it makes fans of your writing like me suirm in our seats in anticipation!
I\'d be disappointed if you didn\'t follow it. Even though that Mimi and Jyou were not the main characters in this fanfiction, they some how managed to play an important role in the plot.
Hoping for more,
SkittleSama
I\'d be disappointed if you didn\'t follow it. Even though that Mimi and Jyou were not the main characters in this fanfiction, they some how managed to play an important role in the plot.
Hoping for more,
SkittleSama
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...... if we\'re grossed out about it? you know i am left with two opinions of you at this moment (aside from the unneccisary declarations of adoration)
option one: is that you are very inflamitory by nature. you say these things to INSURE we will reply in mass with heavily punctuated plea after heavily punctuated plea for more. there is no shame in this, and i\'m fairly certain you\'ll be getting just that wether or not it was your intention.
option two: is that you simply do not grasp the situation we are in here. through this \'single\' story you have won legions of zealotlike fans who in all likelyhood would hold ritualistic animal sacrifices if it were to guarentee a followup. congradulations dear, this is crack and you\'re now our dealer. ^^
i feel like a traitor for saying this, but in the intrest of constructive critisizms you could probally have stopped this story two chapters hence and came out a little stronger. i say this just in the intrest of being constructive. i loved the bonus footage and would pull a \"misery\" (the stephen king book in case you missed the reference) if you entertained even the faintest incling of trying to go back and cut anything out.
the ending would have been more dramatic if cut a little earlier, but on the up side we spent a little more time with tai and sora and got a bit more character development. you can see that the viagra induced indian summer on eX has softened down to a more normal relationship. this does make sense since their first times were pretty much fuled by years and years of pent up lusting. now it\'s showing a bit more of a tender side which is always nice. i loved the part where tai declaired war on sora\'s undergarments, it was cute in a tai kinda way. i also was kinda fond of the scene with mimi and sora buying them in the first place. i\'m not exactly sure why... ¬_¬\'\'
as stated in the last review, this fic really does rock. it\'s giving all the requisit warm-n-fuzzies as well as satisfying on a litterary level (also it has that whole lemon fresh) appeal working for it. it\'s fun and well made. now all that remains is for you to decree unto us what materials shall be used in the construction of your statue and weather you are pro or against the whole animal sacrifice deal.
-ja matta
option one: is that you are very inflamitory by nature. you say these things to INSURE we will reply in mass with heavily punctuated plea after heavily punctuated plea for more. there is no shame in this, and i\'m fairly certain you\'ll be getting just that wether or not it was your intention.
option two: is that you simply do not grasp the situation we are in here. through this \'single\' story you have won legions of zealotlike fans who in all likelyhood would hold ritualistic animal sacrifices if it were to guarentee a followup. congradulations dear, this is crack and you\'re now our dealer. ^^
i feel like a traitor for saying this, but in the intrest of constructive critisizms you could probally have stopped this story two chapters hence and came out a little stronger. i say this just in the intrest of being constructive. i loved the bonus footage and would pull a \"misery\" (the stephen king book in case you missed the reference) if you entertained even the faintest incling of trying to go back and cut anything out.
the ending would have been more dramatic if cut a little earlier, but on the up side we spent a little more time with tai and sora and got a bit more character development. you can see that the viagra induced indian summer on eX has softened down to a more normal relationship. this does make sense since their first times were pretty much fuled by years and years of pent up lusting. now it\'s showing a bit more of a tender side which is always nice. i loved the part where tai declaired war on sora\'s undergarments, it was cute in a tai kinda way. i also was kinda fond of the scene with mimi and sora buying them in the first place. i\'m not exactly sure why... ¬_¬\'\'
as stated in the last review, this fic really does rock. it\'s giving all the requisit warm-n-fuzzies as well as satisfying on a litterary level (also it has that whole lemon fresh) appeal working for it. it\'s fun and well made. now all that remains is for you to decree unto us what materials shall be used in the construction of your statue and weather you are pro or against the whole animal sacrifice deal.
-ja matta
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Ending, I sorry to see this story end so soon. About the Idea of a Mimi & Jyou fic a full story with like tewlve chapters might be overkill but i\'m sure a lot of people wouldn\'t mind seeing something in the relm of a one shot lemon just describing her arrival and reconciliation.
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I actually felt myself tearing up at the end---it was so sweet and the perfect way to end such a kickass fanfic. ^^ And no, I do NOT find the idea of a Mimi and Jyou sequel! I LOVE those two almost as much as Taiora---it\'s SO cute! ^_^ Please do! Later! ^,~
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Gasps:: It\'s over!? NO! lol It was sooooooo great! And the lemon was still hot, no matter what you say. ;-) As for being spoiled...you deserved it! ^_~
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Effing AWESOME!!! Sure, go for the sequel! =-D
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! And yes, I WOULD be interested in a M/J sequel. =-P
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah! gomen for not reviewing the other chapters! THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL! ;3 i loved this so very much! IT HAS BEEN A REALLY LONG TIME SINCE IVE READ SUCH A GOOD TAIORA! the lemon was good, the story was good, you never wasted any time on the chapters, always aiming to please your readers; ID GIVE YOU A 100 OUT OF 10! you dont have to write a sequel if you want. its all up to you. always keep up the good work and hope to see another story soon! thanks for the good read!