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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great finish to the story and i cant begin 2 express how much i luv\'d daily updates, i also thought u were gonna say sumthin abuot taichi moving in with her well mimi was gone but meh.
Great story overall il read and review anything you make in the future :D
also maybe lik a oneshot sequal wouldn\'t be bad lik if mimi were 2 surprise him ;) it mite be pretty kool, but thats up 2 u
Great story overall il read and review anything you make in the future :D
also maybe lik a oneshot sequal wouldn\'t be bad lik if mimi were 2 surprise him ;) it mite be pretty kool, but thats up 2 u
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your Mimi/Jyou doesnt have to be a sequal. It can just be Mimi/Jyou your take on it.
Are you canon, mainly? With the way you write, I would love to see how you handled Miyako/Daisuke.
Are you canon, mainly? With the way you write, I would love to see how you handled Miyako/Daisuke.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The betrayal. The lust. The love. 1 to 5 i give it a 6
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
at least those 2 are back friends. I just wonder how the rest of the group is going to forgive what\'s happening (not to mention what some will do to Mimi for what she did to Yjoe just cause he\'s away for a long long while)
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I rilly liked this chapter since the last 2 were mostly sora/taichi getting it on, not that thats bad :D and this also had a bit of story development.
im guessin this story will end within the next few chapters unless u plan on goin into the jun pregnancy scenario or jyou/mimi stuff.
anyway keep it up :P
-fav digimon story on aff ^_^
im guessin this story will end within the next few chapters unless u plan on goin into the jun pregnancy scenario or jyou/mimi stuff.
anyway keep it up :P
-fav digimon story on aff ^_^
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Did I mention that I want to have your illegitimate internet children?
I\'ve reviewed this fiction once before when I was waiting for further chapters, and I\'ve got to say that the further this fiction goes, the more obsessed I become with waiting for updates. I am so impressed by the style of writing and how perfect everything is described. The feelings that the characters are going through are expressed absolutely flawless and I just can\'t get enough of it.
Just when you think that the story can\'t progress any further, it suddenly takes a sharp turn around a corner and jumps you. For me, it was the phrase, \"Jun\'s pregnant.\" I felt my heart go into my throat. That\'s the sign of an incredible author.
In most cases, you\'d find that when characters cuss or swear in fanfiction, it\'s out of character and horribly done. Completely tactless. I\'m completely attracted to the way that you integrate reality (the use of cussing and other real world topics like pregnancy or cheating or smoking) into the story, but it\'s still perfectly in character. Nothing is out of place and it\'s a total -work.-of.-art.- Example; when Matt was looking for the dip that was never there. You went on to continue the conversation, then went back to the dip subject. Beautiful!
Please update again soon, I\'m excited to see what happens to Sora\'s relationships with the boys.
And don\'t send Joe to Cambodia! Have Mimi take him back. He\'s so sweet. <3
A recurrent reader,
Skittle Sama
I\'ve reviewed this fiction once before when I was waiting for further chapters, and I\'ve got to say that the further this fiction goes, the more obsessed I become with waiting for updates. I am so impressed by the style of writing and how perfect everything is described. The feelings that the characters are going through are expressed absolutely flawless and I just can\'t get enough of it.
Just when you think that the story can\'t progress any further, it suddenly takes a sharp turn around a corner and jumps you. For me, it was the phrase, \"Jun\'s pregnant.\" I felt my heart go into my throat. That\'s the sign of an incredible author.
In most cases, you\'d find that when characters cuss or swear in fanfiction, it\'s out of character and horribly done. Completely tactless. I\'m completely attracted to the way that you integrate reality (the use of cussing and other real world topics like pregnancy or cheating or smoking) into the story, but it\'s still perfectly in character. Nothing is out of place and it\'s a total -work.-of.-art.- Example; when Matt was looking for the dip that was never there. You went on to continue the conversation, then went back to the dip subject. Beautiful!
Please update again soon, I\'m excited to see what happens to Sora\'s relationships with the boys.
And don\'t send Joe to Cambodia! Have Mimi take him back. He\'s so sweet. <3
A recurrent reader,
Skittle Sama
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Never saw THAT one coming! ^_^ This is such an AMAZING story!!! And, just so you know, AnimeBabes and I always review b/c I\'m his older sister, and I MAKE him read it!!!!!! =-P He really DOES like it, though, haha.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN!!! And so another twist has been made! ^^ Hallelujah! That means there\'ll be lots more! =-D
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i loved the cant break eye contact game and how taichi got hard hearing about himself
great chappie plz keep up the good work :P
great chappie plz keep up the good work :P
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very good! I love the smut. And there\'s not much taiora smut here, so I was happy to find this story. I was sad that there wasn\'t any (smut, that is) this chapter...But you update so often that I\'ll forgive you. ;) I was coming to read chapters 6 and 7 again (I have your story bookmarked, by the way) and poof! There was a new chapter! I can\'t complain too much...And I\'ve got to say, I NEVER thought your vanilla, though maybe it was before this story? I don\'t know. It\'s good (I say it yet again!)! Uh...I think that\'s it...