rate_review Reviews

Guess who\'s back? I would just like to say that I like how this story has a real PLOT and isn\'t just \'let\'s have sex!\'. That\'s what makes it really enjoyable for me (not that I don\'t like the \'let\'s have sex!\' stories sometimes. I just like the plot ones better). Hopefully I won\'t need to review again to tell you something stupid...^^;;

Just wanted to say(told you I would review again!)...I\'m not the evil pervert that my first review made me out to be...This WILL be my last review until the next chapter!

god, in what world would you ever consider something like this vanilla? this story was definitly pioneering new middle grounds between cherries garcea flavor and a maltov cocktail. you\'re a complete nut if you think this is anything short of hot. i believe in constructive reviews, fluffy declorations of blind adoration are great for a syrup junkie, but they blow for a writer who\'s trying to improve. i\'m tryin, but ya know, i am falling short of thinking of a lot that needs improvement here. you have a very nice set of characters in this. sora and taichi both show a tender side tword each other, but you realllly do get the whole lust thing. it\'s not really an easy sell getting both of those two angles working right. kinda along the lines of having your cake and eating it too i suppose. i guess what i\'m saying is that you wrote the characters believebly. the line where taichi debated any sport where there is no running around was just so him! lol gomen, i don\'t mean to ramble, but you write a really mean story and i would love to read others you\'ve done. i know Afiction net is pretty limited to just the hot and heavy, but you obviously are tallented at more then just knock down, drag out, flesh clawing, matress spring ruining, sex scenes. (very litterary, ne?) so if you are published at media minder or another site, i would very much like a link there. digimon was my first love and it always will have a kind of nostalga with me. *grins sheepishly* remember a little while ago i talked about how i am not a great fan of love letter reviews? well welcome to my hypocricy. i am going to go before i reach the point where this review will require a teardrop-eyed teddy bear and flowers. my woebegone male ego just wouldn\'t survive that. ^_^ thanks for the indulgence. - Logan

Another great chapter. The only thing that I have to say is that I think you might have made them a little too proper. It might be just \'cause I remember how they acted in the one that FoxKids used to give. But when you have them saying things like, \"Yes, that\'s how I feel.\", it seems to me like it would be more natural if they had said \"Yeah, that\'s how I feel.\" instead. But again, great chapter. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.

You are wonderful. You seem to know the perfect harmony between smaut and romance. It is well writen and I am pleased with the fact that you really took time to make everything flow. I am waiting for your next chapter, as I am sure there will be one. Untill then, yay you.
P.S. I am sorry that I don\'t have any constructive criticism to offer you.

WOW, you are a machine!!!! haha Seriously---as soon as I wake up there\'s another chapter! =-D I hope this speediness never ends! Keep going! I\'m interested in finding out what\'ll happen next! ^,~

hey, sorry I only managed to read chapter one so far... the review for the others will follow though!

I loved what I read so far though! Man, that was hot... *sweats* (However, I\'m having a little problem with Sora emotionally betraying her bf, but I hope you\'ll deal with that in the other chapters)

I laughed at the ending... that\'s like the meanest thing a guy can say to a girl, hehe... poor Sora. But at least she knows he likes her anyway ^______^

You really have been working on the lemons! Another grade A chapter, and I honestly wouldn\'t expect anything less from you. And I can personally vouch for you when you say that you\'re getting better at lemons. It seems that with every passing lemon that you write, your skill increases. Keep up the good work, and keep me updated on when you post, ok?

This story is great its among my fav digimon fanfictions ever
plzz keep up the good work

awesome! that was hot! gosh, i was so happy that you updated again! WRITE ANOTHER PLEASE! UPDATE ASAP!