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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well thought out and written I really like the way things beggining to shape out between Sora and Yamato. keep up the good work
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job! Really, it was great! You\'ve got me wanting more!!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* Sora got a fetish of being dominated :p lol
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sora was on a hair trigger wasn\'t she? Not that I can really blame her. Great lemon. You\'ve definitly improved since your last fics. But again, I\'m stumped. Like in your last fic, this one seems like it could stop right here, but at the same time it looks like it could still be worked on. Which is it?
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanx for the get well chapter! ^^ lol Very good, as always--that was hot, what with the whole eye contact thing. =-P Bring it on!! (more, that is)
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If that was vanilla, give me some more! ^-^ haha Very nice/erotic! And a shower scene, too? One of my favorite places to depict that kinda stuff---yet I\'ve never put it in any of my fics. =-P This lemon was hotter than the first, and it\'s always hard to improve, so brava! ^_______^
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoOoOoh! lol Another update! ^.^V Beautemous! lol Very very good! ^_^
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MAN! that was good! POOR YAMA! then again...he cheated too! OH I HOPE THIS WONT RUIN THEIR FRIENDSHIP! good story youve got here, its been a long time since ive read a taiora. i cant wait for the lemon, PLEASE UPDATE NOW!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Didn\'t see that coming. Great chapter, but it kinda fealt a little bit rushed. But then again, you told me it was a little shorter to begin with, so I guess I shouldn\'t complain. All I have to say really is that in your ANs, don\'t really say what\'s going to happen in the chapter. It kinda ruins it for us readers. But anyways, still a great chapter. Let me know when the next one is up, ok?
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooooooooh la la!