rate_review Reviews

hi!!!!!!I LIKE THE PAIRING RYOXFUJI!! I THINK THEY'RE A GREAT COUPLE!!!MAYBE MAKE FUJI THE UKE...THAT WOULD BE FUN!!

I like it! ^^ I wanted the Tezuka and Ryoma pairing, but oh well Momo and Ryoma is good too. On with your story! >.^

Hello. :)
Interesting story, I must say... however... if you are seriously into fanfiction, I suggest you can go to the AFF Yahoo! groups for a beta.

Don\'t take me wrong! This is indeed a sweet story with lots of yaoi, but sometimes, the spelling and grammar does confuse me a bit.
However, the consideration of getting a beta is up to you. :)

I hope it\'s not too late... I wish for Tezuka and Ryoma love. <3

O_O I agree with you on the part where Fuji\'s little brother left when seeing his older brother and Ryoma kissing. I would\'ve stayed and watched. Man, I wish they were real and I could meet them. This story is great. I love Rage. I really want Ryoma and Tezuka together though it might be too late. Is the vote still taking place? I really hope it is. Can\'t wait until the next chapter. It\'s going to be fun to read.

Your paragraphs are messed up. Your characterization of Ryoma is horribly OOC.
Your original character is a rip-off of Anna from Shaman King and a Mary Sue.

Besides this your grammar and spelling definitely needs to see a beta-reader.

I love you for writing this story.
And though I hate Rage for her bad additude (she even pushed Katsuo in the ground, BAD GIRL), I forgive her \'cause her background.
Oh, and I\'ve to say that some of the characters are little OOC, but I don\'t think it\'s that bad thing - I love when Ryo-chan gets all
emotional and blushy and stuff. XD
I\'m so bad in english (it\'s funny how easier it\'s to read than write), that I think I\'m not gonna say anything more than that. ^^;

Ohohoh, of course I\'ve to first vote for the pairing. :3
I really like both FujiRyo and MomoRyo, and though I think MomoRyo would be so much cuter couple in this story, my votes goes
for Fuji/Ryoma \'cause, ya know, THRILL PAIR IS LOVE. <3<3<3 Though I would still keep reading, even if you paired Ryoma with
Momo. ^.^

Keep up the good work. n__n

Rage sound a bit like Anna(Shaman King) and is she lesbian? sound like it too

am i late..????? i\'m a devoted shipper of TezuRyo...!! so please please pretty please... pair them together in this story...!!

I love the fic can\'t wait to see more of what you have to write just two things though.............................Where Are The Lemons?*Whines* and one more thing tell your brother from now on where he can stick it, cause I for one want more updates and I highly doubt he\'s the one updating for us. Other then that keep up the great work ^_~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can i vote for fuji & tezuka & ryoma? erm...and update soon.