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OMG ryoma has a fiance???!!! what is this world coming to lol. meh the plot line is cute but you need to work a little more on your actual story writting. it doesnt seem to have much of a solid point. it seems to just pop around from one idea to the next. maybe you should take your time on your next chapter and not rush it. its an adorable idea you have to give ryoma a fiance who doesnt want to be one and have her hook him up with someone but you really need to work on making your story more solid and better to follow through. other than that i will put down mine and my boyfriend\'s votes:
I vote for Momo/Ryoma no matter what lol
And he votes for GoldenPair
Ganbatte ne!!

Waii nya soo cute. Rage pairing poor ochibi up with someone. soo sneaky like fuji-sempai nya. I want oishi with eiji and ochibi with Momo-chan nya!! hoi they\'re soo cute nya!!! keep it up nya!!! i wanna see ochibi ending up with Momo-chan nya!!!

Tezuka/Ryoma please!

Good story, btw... I\'m a little turned off b/c of the script formatting but oh well. Love the plotline.

I dont think you\'r gonna get 20 votes and if you will it\'ll take forever XP.....I vote..............KaidoMomo!!.......I dont know for Echizen....too yong, no? but TezukaEchizen is will be interesting, and EijiEchizen makes me gigle~!
p.s
Make the chaps a bit longer pleas

Hay. I vote for tezuryu....you dont see that alot.

WAIII i want momoryo!!!!!!! this would be so cute if it was momoryo cuz they are best of friends and just so cute together.

interesting story. this is one i havent seen repeated and im glad to see there are still people out there who have a good imagination to come up with something that has yet to be done. also as my net name says i would like to vote for MomoRyo if you please. also if you are willing you could add in some of the other character couples as in tezu/fuji, GP, and maybe a bit of inuikai. keep up the good work and take your time to write up your chapters. it will help you to make it quite interesting and less mistakes ne ^_~ Ganbatte!!

Hi if you please id like to vote for MomoRyoma. btw dont you think that 20 votes is a bit much? im not complaining its just that you may not get many votes. i know i didnt when i wrote a fic, but its just a sugestion.

lol came to bother you again^^ the last chapter was written better...this one has too much ooc and looks a bit rush....but hay, who am I to complain? and as I said before: make it Tezuka/Echizen fic ;_; !!

wery original^^ cant wait till the next (hopfully longer) chapter.
I love rage! the name do fit her. ho! and make this pic a TezukaRyuma one?? *looks at you with kitten eyes**(becos dogs are simply stupid^^)*
naaa.....as long as you leave Inui alone (his MINE MINE MINE!!) all is good.
and why ryuma and rage are together in the first place? this is all for now. keep on the good work^^ (and sorry for the spelling -_-;;)