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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooh i likeit, i wanna see more ver. soon.
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BT needs more, this fic is so goooooooooooooooooood! It makes me happy for my own twisted reasons. Sadness (in stories) makes me happy. *nodnod* Anyways, I love your writing, I\'m rambling... it\'s 11 o clock... I\'m going to bed... MORE!!!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, touching chapter. The only concern I had about your first chapter was doubt that the honorable Koujaki would participate or knowingly permit such deaths for the Sanzo party, much less Dou permit his brother to be beaten to death. You\'ve not only explained that issue, you did so with great care for this party of characters as well. Wonderfully written, and deeply felt. I greatly look forward to more.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m definately not disappointed! I thought it was fantastic. I can\'t wait until the next chapter.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* you really know how to make a girl sad, huh? ^_^ This chapter was awesome! You have me just itching for more. The angsty part of me sooooo wants to do an illustration for this. You definitely know how to paint a picture with words. Keep it up! ^_^
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well since you promised the party was coming back, I feel reassured. ^_^ Lovely chapter. And I believe that Kougaji would act this way. As much as he wanted to defeat the Sanzo gang to help his mother, he still respected them and hesitated at moments throughout the series. Great job portraying a heart breaking moment.
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*In a stiff montone* Next. Chapter. NOW. This is the first character death story that\'s ever held my attention, and it\'s bloody well EXCELLENT. Do write the next chapter quickly. Offhand, I nearly started crying in both of the chapters. Damn it... *Quick smile*
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very well done.
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... that was beautiful. Your way with words really made me feel the pain and the defeat that Sanzo felt. More please. Yes, more. Great start! ^_^
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very intersting story, well written. I\'d like to see more from you.