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After laughing myself off my chair more than a few times, and nearly dehydrating myself with tears of laughter, I was leery about venturing into this something more serious.
I am glad I did.
From the beginning it pulled me in, and kept me.
One line--of many I'm sure but this is the most recent--"The minute he sought to change fate, fate began setting motions in place to change things back.” This should go down in the annals of history. It is SO true. Your words are prophetic. Indeed, the entire story is filled with such depth of meaning and warnings.
I'm putting this in my del.icio.us bookmarks because I have to remember this one. I do.
You've woven together something quite complication, in fact it reminds me of something Clive Barker might have written, though a bit tamer than his usual stuff.

omg that was awesome! i got started reading it when i got home and its all of a sudden 6am and im sad that its over. you write so goooooood, and it didn't even (really) hit me that there was a greater proportion of plot to smut than i am usually willing to deal with on these things. Go You! <3

awesome story!!! it was reallly good!! i love it, i didnt expect sumthing like this on aff, it creeped me a bit but it was reallly!! good!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story of love, desire, betrayel and murder. You definitely succeeded in creating something different in this universe, something with considerable plot and depth. Well done.

This is such an awesome story! I rarely see a plot this original (in any fandom) and it\'s interesting the way that it\'s *not really AU*! I was worried for a moment that the story was going to imply that Eiri\'s and Shuichi\'s love was fated to doom, but it all worked out in the end! The snapshots at the end were lovely...and I\'ll certainly never look at Sakano in the same light again! ^__^

So THIS is where I\'ve seen this story before. I was so pleased to see that you\'d moved it to ff.net as well; it deserves to be read. It has such a beautiful and, dare I say without immaturely giggling, erotic quality that allowed it to be here. It is most CERTAINLY not a PWP at all. And so, so beautifully written. I still can\'t fathom how you came up with a plot this imaginitive. I\'ve called this story, with my friend, \"The Queen of all AU\'s,\" and I meant it. Anyone who hasn\'t read this story must certainly should. Tohma lovers, Tohma resenters (even though it\'s most certainly not all about him!), Yuki and Shuichi lovers.. it\'s just.. oh, I don\'t know how to feel. All the couples are sweet. All of them. I can\'t gush about this story enough.

That was amazing!
Though...I do feel a bit sorry for Tohma...is that normal?

hey This is sad Shu chan dies,
pouts in corner
But it was an awsome fic,
I have a fic to hate Tomha over again I can\'t stand that hat of his
I SOOOOOOOOO LOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE ittt

I have read the entire story and I must say this is definitely my favourite Grav fic on here so far. I love your originalitly. Daring to do something completely different and making an amazing story! I mean thats what fanfiction is all about, doing things wacky and quirky with characters from our favourite muses. I myself am drawn to unique stories like these ones. Bravo I well definitely look forward to any future fics of yours ^___^

Sorry I should have reviewed earlier but I\'ve been so caught up with my KxHiro ficcy ^^; *ish shot*

WAAAAAAH! This story was great! I loved it, the whole thing! And the snap shots at the end were a nice touch, really. I hope you write another fic soon, I enjoy your style, you\'re very talented.