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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although I am going to say that you could benefit from a good beta, I\'m also going to say that I find the concept intriguing and will continue reading this. There are some grammatical errors that, once corrected, would improve the enjoyment of reading this fic. I hope you continue with this.
\"Because the best butchers wear Armani.\" Very funny line ^_^
\"Because the best butchers wear Armani.\" Very funny line ^_^
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little short, but enjoyable none the less! Very quick to catch snippets of what Nagi\'s life may have been, and pleasing to the max. Love it! More, i say, more!