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January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a perfect way to describe Jin's and Fuu's first time together. Exactly as I imagined it would be, I loved how you had Jin firmly in control, showing Fuu just what real lovemaking is all about. Thank you.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this little short it left me hunger for more.
TaintedInuShemeeko
TaintedInuShemeeko
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic.! I think they make such a good pairing!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story was so cute! It was really really good! o^_^o
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great loved it!
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute little Jin/Fuu fic... Jin seemed a little OOC, but it worked. One thing to be very careful of is being passive... in the first paragraph, you say \"a room at the inn was found\" which seems awkward... just \"they found a room at the local inn\" is fine. Just stuff to look out for. Nice fic tho, hope you write more!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT fanfic. I very much like Jin and Fuu, therefore I had more reason to enjoy your story. Your writing has a lot of sensual description; makes you a great author for hentai. Keep at it, man and don\'t give up.
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Short and sweet. Made me renew my love of romantic one-shots. Great job. ^_^
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the worst story ever! No, I\'m joking. That was awesome! It kind of made me want to fuck you REALLY bad! Even though thats how I feel everyday, this didn\'t help. :)
Did you read my journal yesterday? well, you should have.
WRITE MORE!!!! PLEASE!!
Did you read my journal yesterday? well, you should have.
WRITE MORE!!!! PLEASE!!