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oh gawsh...........that was amazing....you should make a sequal.....

I liked it. Well, I was supprised at it too, but did not find it dumb or even pr0n. It was a gentle interaction between two hestiant lovers.

this is one of the best fanfiction stories ive read in awhile i hope you continue to write like this and also more witch hunter robin stories.

Besides the fact that I\'ve never in my life stumbled upon such an amazing WHR fic, I haven\'t read a fic - ANY fic - that good in a very, very long time. The writing was hauntingly exquisite. There is a simplicity to it, but not because it\'s rudimentary, but more for the fact that it\'s so vulnerable, honest, and intimate. The mediocrity of events was the perfect counterpart to the depth of change and connection occuring between the two main characters. A scene like this is all that\'s needed to give a satisfying conclusion to such a darkly beautiful series. That\'s what I loved most about this breathtaking fic, how content and at peace I felt at its end, even after reading that erotic lemon. In reference to the lemon, it\'s got to be one of the most gratifying, most well-constructed erotic scenes I\'ve read, ever. It was powerful, but tender, and personally, I felt you molded Amon and Robin into perfect representations of Adam and Eve through their actions. Amon was solidly male and Robin was sweetly female - their gender roles stereotypical, but for that very reason, highly arousing. Geez, there are so many reasons that I\'m blown away by this fic. I hope I stumble upon more of your work on this site. Absolutely fantastic job.

Alright, this is random and I completely understand if you decline responding, but because I highly admire your writing style I was wondering if you wouldn\'t mind beta-ing a WHR/IY crossover fic I\'m working on. It\'s only a 4 parter (4 chapters, really, just a long one-shot) and relies on a big enough chunk of WHR plot that most people don\'t get b/c they haven\'t watched to show *silly people!*. If you\'re familiar with Inuyasha as well, would you be interested? If not, then hey, I got to read your fic, who am I to complain?

hey dont worry about the truth or dare, i thought it was very cute, your story was well written and full of smuff (smut and fluff)

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wow! that was really good. I loved the way you portrayed Amon and Robin\'s reaction with each other, which all started from a not-so-innocent game of Truth or Dare. I definately think that you picked a good game (which fits perfectly in the development of the plot) because it\'s so cliche yet it really gets things started!! WHOOT!! Please continue and not make this into a one shot! Please write more?

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Hot damn, woman! You\'ve already proven you can write exceedingly well in general, but now you prove you can write SMUT too?!

FAWESOME.

I think we have another Meris on our hands!

Well done, seriously. I would LOVE to see some more lemons from you. *Hint hint.*

I loved this story. It flowed very well. Great job.