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Eeek! So cute ^___^

I love your writing style so much!! The cute ending was the perfect way to tie this up! You described the swordplay very realistically as well. Have you ever fought with swords, or did you learn this someway else? I just found the whole fic to be very witty, well thought out and fun. Great job! ^.^

SWEET!!! I loved the banter during the sword fight! It was like foreplay for these two! :D Just the mental image of K in tight black breeches and a billowy white top looking like something straight off a romance novel cover is just too damn sexy!!! *drool!* The lemon was priceless! \"Grab me like stolen money\" = LMAO!!! :D You did a great job on this one! LOVED IT!!!

That was absolutely amazing! The details were wonderful and well.......god, I\'m a bit short of words at the moment.....Well, I\'m eternally greatful for who\'s ever genes you got enabeling(sp?) you to write like this. ^_^ Keep up the good work and until another one of my reviews, See You!

Great story, well done. I really enjoyed it.

Oooo, very yummy. I can\'t commend highly enough your capability for writing a fight-fic. I tried a little swordplay in one of mine and damn, it\'s hard! And the lemon, well that was just...guhhh...*falls into a drooling stupour*

wow! great story!!!! XDDDD \"He flicked his hangnail aside then did as requested. He grabbed Hiro like stolen money, with quick, hard hands then had his way with him, ravishing and taking him, making room for Daddy while riding him like a bad tempered pony. \"... i have to say that i\'m very very very impressed w/ this line.. you somehow managed to fit all the things that hiro said into one sentence and not make it sound like a nasty run-on.... anyway, grab me like stolen money? lmao.. i have never heard of that one before

Fantastic, simply fantastic. Some of the best shounen Ai I\'ve read... and trust me, I\'m very prolific in that. You should feel entirely special, I usually HATE AU fics, but I took a chance on this one, seeing as it was a K/Hiro pairing. I\'m glad I did! I also loved Ryuichi\'s (It was Ryuichi, wasn\'t it?) cameo appearance. I have wanted a Japanese War Fan for so long...*Sigh.* really, a superb job. 5 stars.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! This is like Dynasty Warrior K and Hiro, your descriptions of their swordplay and the list of weapons was AMAZING!! The banter was soo entertaining, this story made me laugh often. Thank you for a great story...and my favourite pairing in an AU fic that was soo original and fun. Definitlely need more of these great fics! Squeeeee!! *runs off to read this again*

This is such an excellent story ^_^ I\'ve really enjoyed reading it--I hate to see that it\'s going to be a oneshot! I can just imagine K doing that to poor Hiroshi in bed just to torment him. Both characters were very in-character, and I really liked the funny bantering that Hiro tried to divert K\'s attention. Fast in bed indeed! I guess that proves never to taunt your lovers even if you do have a long, pointy object at you disposal, ne? ^^;

*Gives you a cute little K and Hiro plushie--complete with toothpick swords!* I enjoyed the smut and look forward to seeing more ficcies from you ^_~