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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This deserves so many more reviews! It's wonderful, and the first person is one of the best I've read.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmmm, I just love YohjixAya smut. Yummy. ^^
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHA!! YOHJI IS SUCK A SEX GOD!! I love it!! You made Aya seem stupid and confused though... but that\'s OK!! YOU WRITING STYLE KICKS ASS!! All in all it was a 100% fantastic.... no... INGENIOUS story
P.S. I\'m not crazy you story was just that good ^_^
P.S. I\'m not crazy you story was just that good ^_^
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to compliment you on your choice of songs for this particular fiction. You did a wonderful job of inserting it into the storyline and the attitude reflected was perfect for a first coupling between Aya and Yohji. I also enjoyed the portrayal of Aya as almost a wonded, haughty feline toward the end and the high-handed misunderstanding of what his partner actually meant. It is very much in keeping with how I chose to view the stoic swordsman. Well done!
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really well done. I love the feeling of tension in Yoji and the lemon was incredibly hot. Keep writing.