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January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! This is the most wonderful and expressive piece of writing I've read in a long time. The chars are perfectly IC and the plot is plasable. Absolutely exquesite. (hot too)
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! It was written so well!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness but was this beautifully written. I guess what I loved best was how you did such a good job of keeping Muraki so wonderfully and disturbingly in character. As much as I would love a follow up on this, I will also admit that I could be completely satisfied with this being a one-shot. Once again, lovely job. Keep up the good work!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*stares hypnotically at laptop screen* ...Whoa...
That. Was. Hot!!! That must have been one helluva nightmare for Tsuzuki, and one helluva dream/fantasy come true for me... And Muraki-sama too. *big lewd grin*
That. Was. Hot!!! That must have been one helluva nightmare for Tsuzuki, and one helluva dream/fantasy come true for me... And Muraki-sama too. *big lewd grin*
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I simply loved this! It was very well written, very detailed, and very yummy. ;}
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed this story. the sinister and somewhat enigmatic actions of muraki always surprise by their depth of inhumanity. although, seeing as muraki and tsuzuki both have demon blood, it\'s not completely out of the blue. it was also a very good lemon. keep the good work up
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ Simply beautiful. Wonderfully written...
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was wonderful, you really are a skilled writer. Your language is very refined and this story is a high-standard erotica.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t ever recall muraki calling tsuzuki \'mr\' in the manga or anime? oh well. good story, great lemon, awesome details. ^o^
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully expressive writing. I could see the scenes so clearly and their feelings were very clear. I love it when someone can make such a great story and still keep the subjects in character and you did that superbly. I\'m really looking forward to seeing what you write next.