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I have a feeling that the reincarnation of Saki is Hisoka...how strange, how very very strange....continue! Your detail is getting better!

Hey, yay you updated. I really liked it, it was creepishly good, because you said Saki was reincarnated and under their noses. o.0 Anyway I think Saki\'s reincarnate is Hisoka. It\'s a guess. And dont worry about the bad exam grade, all that matters is that you passed. ^-^ I cant wait to read the rest of it keep up the good work. bye.

Who\'s Saki\'s reincarnation?! I wanna know! It couldn\'t be Tsuzuki because he was alive before them. I think the only logical person would be Hisoka? Update soon! ^_^

Hey, this re-edited chapter of Muraki\'s past is better than the old one. You went into much more detail with the sex scene. I cant wait to read the rest of it.

Aw for me? *snugs* I\'m in so much pain right now. . . had my wisdom teeth removed this morning...have to have gauze in my mouth until the bleeding stops, and it is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo painful. . . the pain killers aren\'t working at all, and having stitches in there is annoying.

But about this chapter, lol. You certainly added length and detail. . . but you forgot pace. *pokes* You have definitely improved, but now you should work on making things flow a little better and having them move at a slower pace.

I like your idea of Saki being the one to ruin his right eye, that certainly may be the reason for the eye\'s removal in the manga. . . the manga is rather different in many ways from the anime. The next manga comes out on November 15th! I can\'t wait! And I can\'t wait for your next update either!

Hay chicadee, wutcha been up to? Not to shabby here, well i just read thru reviews, sry so late, lol, but i think HISOKA *drools* should be with me, hee hee just kidding. I think Hisoka should be with Muraki or Tsuzuki, *drools again*, oh, and i won\'t be over this weekend, i have Homecoming, see ya next weekend!

~*~ToNi~*~

Poor Muraki. I\'ve only read the manga - so I have to ask. Did
you make up the Saki story? If you did great job. I\'ve been
wondering how Muraki lost his eye. Plus, I like knowing that
your \"anal\" about getting the facts rights - I\'m that way too.
Once again you\'ve done great. My only complaint is that I
noticed a few incorrect words - spell check probably screwed
you up. No biggie - I knew what you meant.

Whoo! You updated... ^_^ This chapter was good, very interesting. Poor Muraki though... hehe update soon!

Hey! OMG I LOVED IT!!! Damn you are really talented! *DROOLS* The sex scene on the porch was like PUMP...PUMP...PUMP...AH! Uh, ahem...sorry. HAHAHAHA! I loved it really. I cant wait to read the rest of it. This was the best chapter yet. Oh, I cant wait to read the rest...sigh...hope you keep up the good work and continue to...I\'ll leave that for your imagination. HAHAHAHA!!! Oh, yeah great job with the s and m! Wouldn\'t have it any other way. Bye!

Sc00by, I am so proud of you! Not only is this your longest chapter, it\'s your best. Scenery, character insight, fabulous details; I was right there in the story and loving it. *drools* ...Wow. That was absolutely fantastic! That was well worth the wait.