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I hate to see Tatsume and Watari at odds...but if must be done, then bring it on! I\'m just waiting for Tsuzuki and Muraki! ^_^ And poor Hisoka! You\'re doing a great job, Sc00by!

YAY!!!!! You wrote more!!!!! I\'m so happy now! I really love what you have done with this chapter. Kinda makes me feel sad and depressed at the same time. (sniff) Oh well, back to the story....to make Tatsumi regret sleeping with Watari, in my opinion...was an excellent and bold choice. Simply because he only wanted it to escape the pain of having lost Tsuzuki. Well, I\'m looking forward to the next part of this delicious....AHEM!!! Bye!!!!!!

Okay, I\'m confused (nothing new for me) so despite what your summary says about it being a Muraki/Tsuzuki fic, Tsuzuki will end up with Hisoka (?) and lemons with Tsuzuki being the seme are not going to happen? Straighten me out, please \'cause a pairing with Tsuzuki/Hisoka will have me abandoning the fic..sorry, but only Muraki/Tsuzuki fics get me excited ^^

Sc00by, your AFF Debut has turned out fantastic! I\'m so jealous of your creativity! Ah, let me just get to the nitty-gritty. I love to read fanfics that have interesting chapter titles, and you have great titles...makes me have dirty thoughts! >.<\'
I loved the way this story started and how it kept evolving as every chapter went on. If you read it over again, (which I don\'t doubt you do), you can see how much more descriptive you become with every chapter. It\'s a great feeling to watch a writer mold her skills into an awesome story with the perfect plot twists.
And my \'new\' favorite line of the story? \"Do you think Tsuzuki could ever fall for a broken doll like you?\" Said by my favorite evil doctor, I giggled madly and drooled all over the keyboard. O.o (Not that you really needed to know that part...)
I was already blown away by this last chapter, so I have no idea what you\'re going to pull on us this next time, but I know you\'ll have fun doing it!
Thank you so much for allowing us to delve into your mind and thank you for sharing this story. It\'s an honor to be able to review your work. I just wish I had the guts to put one up.
Thanks, again! And you\'re doing great! I just wish it wouldn\'t end...I love seeing Tatsumi and Watari together!
Good luck in writing your next chapters. I can\'t wait!
~Matsume_Kazuo (Whitters!)

Ah, I remember that part of Scary Movie two! lol! Nice! Gah (yes, I say that in every review) where is the Tsuzuki/Muraki goodness? You\'re killing meeeeee! *tackles and ties up* Oh wait, if I tie you up, you can\'t write *ponders this...unties you* Eh, you better be glad you\'re writing a good story, otherwise I\'d have to feed you to rabid chibis XD Lol, keep up the wonderful work! I\'ll definitely continue checking for updates!

If your idea for Tsuzuki and Hisoka doesn\'t work out then i think i\'ll go ahead and vote for Hijiri and Hisoka >.>; for some reason I find those two adorable together lol. and i love Hijiri~ ^_^ update soon!

Hey! I just read your update, and wow!!!! I completly loved it. I could really empath Tszuki\'s feelings. I have always felt that way. Its really depressing. Sorry. Anyways... back to the story. I really liked what you did with the Hisoka dream. Very nice. Very nice indeed! Well, I can\'t wait to read the rest of it! One thing, spellcheck your words and check over your sentences. Keep, up the great sex! Bye!!!

Holy crap. You are one awesome writer. I\'m loving the story so far, hun. There\'s a few tiny things that need fixing. Like repetitive words/phrases, but I\'m sure you\'re just in a hurry to pump these things out for we, the hungry fangirls. I like the \"blued eyed-so and so\" or \"the purple eyed whatshisface\" stuff. It\'s like a trademark of yours now.

My vote would be for Hisoka to be paired up with Watari...I was going to suggest Oriya, but seeing how Watari needed votes and Tsuzuki was ahead, I\'ll vote for Watari.

I want Tsuzuki to remain with Muraki...please don\'t pair Tsuzuki with Hisoka, only because there are way tooo many fics written about those two (god knows why) and more Muraki/Tsuzuki pairings are needed. Anyway, that\'s my opinion.

I\'m eagerly awaiting your lemon with Tsuzuki being on top...you\'re still going ahead with that, right? Hope so! ^^

The Watari/Tatsumi pairing was quite steamy...keep writing! ^^

*hmmmm.....*

Heh, I very much liked that chapter...tho Tatsumi doesn\'t seem
the uke-ish type, but seeing the state he\'s been in since Tsu\'s been gone...well,
I guess we can excuse him this time.... (^_^;;;)

Oh, BTW, Hisoka? Hmm, if Tsuzuki\'s going with Muraki (possibly?), then...is there anyone left O_o?