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for True Feelings

by Sc00byD00315

person Kagi
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^__________________^ Yay! Lemon! *nice nice nicely done!!*

NOW!! ---Motto, motto na!! *laughes happily* XD
person KyrosMage
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve written some excellent scenes...pleaze continue....
person Witchy Willow
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey much better description this time. I really can\'t imagine how hard this is to
write. Ergo I review! Ooooh, is Tsuzuki starting to give up? I also liked the
watch tie in. Good job.
person KyrosMage
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe....\"his little rose\" I\'ll bet he\'s up to something delishously evil...and related to putting Tsu-chan in bondage.....

person Kagi
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ASHITERU NA!!!~~~~ *can\'t wait for more!! ^____^*
person Krazed Kazoo
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dangit... I wrote a nice little blurb, but I accidently pressed the \"back\" button on my mouse, and it deleted it.

BAH. I\'M TOO LAZY TO WRITE IT OVER.

Basically, I said it was really good. I like the story, and I\'ve never even heard of these characters before! It\'s like... \"WTF, THIS IS AWESOME!\" Too bad my sweet, innocent little KayKay has been corrupted by this perverse world. *sobs*

But we wants the lemons. We wants the next juicy lemon... WE WANTS IT, WE MUST HAVE IT!1!! *gollum*
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t understand how it is confusing but, since some of you really want a Watari/Tatsumi scene I will write one for you guys. I was hoping that there were some of you out there. ^_^ I will try to get some more chapters out there but as I said before, school is in the way. Since you guys like my story so much I will write an extra long scene with.... Well you\'ll just have to read and find out. As soon as I post that is. ^^; I\'m trying to no jump right into scenes because I\'m just as excited to write them as you are to read them. I don\'t know how long this story will be but, I hope that everyone will read it until I finish. Thanks for your support, You don\'t know how happy I am to get these reviews. Hope that you will like the rest of the story. ^_^
person Kagi
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a lovely story...but WHY did you stop the Tatsumi and Watari action!?!? *sobs dramatically*
(I know this is a Tsuzuki X Muraki ficlet, but....WAIIIIIIIIIIII~~~! It was so close!! )

Go Story! Hoorah! ^_______^ Let\'s get some hot Tsu and Mura action going on, k? ^__~ <3
person Asher K.
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*nods thoughtfully*
Yeah, the plot is going in confusing directions but yet I still love this story to death...*sighes*
Hey, I say you put some more scenes with Tatsumi and Watari...ya know, =those= types of scenes...*giggles*
Pleaz Continue!
person Cody
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I like your story please right more!
oh! does Hisoka harbor feelings for Tzuski?
That would be so cool if Murki got in a cat fight
with Hisoka LOL!

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