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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job, nice plot, well written
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u should definetly continue~!!!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! If it was this good this far, I can\'t even imagine what it\'ll be like when they do go all the way. And funny portrayal of Mugen too.
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Excellent. Par excellence. Not verbose, yet with just the right amount of detail. All characters were kept in character right down to their thought processes- which I liked the most. You got Mugen\'s thinking downpat exceptionally well. A very good read, indeed.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was really good! Especially for your first fic! Keep \'em coming (in both senses, hahaha), you horny bunny, you.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was well done and i have to say, Myougin was very in character. Impressively so. Most people try to get their characters to be at least a little likeable in motivation, especially with anime fanfics. You, however, chose to let Myougin stay as he is. kudos.
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written! ::claps crazily:: VERY in character for both Mugen and Fuu. The story line was sexy and just WOAH! I look forward to more stories from you.
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
perhaps another chappie?! loved it!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter please!! Awesome descriptions =D Update soon..hopefully it wasn\'t a one shot..
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good one! i love fuu/mugen.