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That was very well written, something I don\'t find very often anymore. You did a great job and I really enjoyed reading it.

please continue! this has great potential.

Oh you have to continue!! I love it!!!! So great! :(( So beautiful! So arousing! lol

Whoo hoo! That rocked my socks! It\'s really great to sit down and read a story by an author who actually knows how to write.

This was really good. The characterization was spot-on. I\'m looking forward to reading more of your work!

Ahh! You have to continue! That was the best Samurai Champloo fanfic I\'ve read! ^^ Please! Lol!

wow..havent seen much of the show yet, only whats been on adult swim and from what I can tell you have the charactors pegged soo right, and I can sooo see this happening lol, great work, would love to read more, see if Mugen can seduce Fuu into more and if Jin will find out and what his response will be..from what ive seen I thought Fuu had a thing for Jin, but then again, there are bits of scenes when I think she wants them both..but is that soo bad?? hehe, great work, thanks for the great read, would love to read more if you decide to add more, till then much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

@ citrus baby:
I see what you mean. No worries, thanks for answering me back. I thought I got the impression of Mugen\'s \"pedestal\" thing from the anime, but perhaps not. I\'m not going to say that I wasn\'t infuenced at all by \"The Electra Complex\" because I read it, so it must have influenced me on some level, as things do for every artist. And now that I think about it, perhaps Mugen was a bit angry, but I was going more for leecherous rather than angry, though, it is angry.

As for the thing about not wanting Jin to know, that was more about trying not to let an older brother found out. I mean, would you want to your older brother, whom you looked up to, find out you were fooling around with the town rebel? I think not! LOL Since Mugen is pretty much an open book sort of person (Ep. 24 gives that evidence the most, I think), Fuu would be scared Mugen would accidentally tell Jin and therefore have Jin see her in a different light. This is definetly a FuuxMugen thing.

I won\'t go into an indepth essay (though I could! LOL), but I felt that the relationship with Fuu and Jin was purely fraternal, but that there was a possibility for more with Mugen, but neither character would let themselves go that far.

Anyway, thanks for your thoughts, they do help! :D

This was really good for a first fic! So many writers can\'t even spell anymore, and they just don\'t know what they\'re doing, but this was very well done and I liked it so much! I think this is good as a one-shot, but I would certainly read more if it continues. I would enjoy seeing what they do to drive each other crazy, but not be able to stay away from each other. I would so love to see Mugen get lovesick and whipped! Ha! Keep up the good work!

bravo! well done for a first-timer! i sugesst that you write a sequal.