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i like this, i\'d like to see it go a couple of chapters further

nah, i wasn\'t accusing you of plagiarism, seriously. but i\'m glad you didn\'t take it like some of those really bitchy sensitive writers that would instantly grab my last comment as a direct insult and post it to the world for other people to flame, assuming things that i never even mentioned.

about the last comment, maybe it was because i read \'the electra complex\' right before i read this fic, i dont know, but the references to her put on a pedestal and mugen being so angry and spiteful towards fuu set me off a bit. i did not get the feeling at all from the anime that mugen felt that way, and i never got the feeling that fuu loved jin either [i have no preferences, really, so i don\'t believe i\'m being biased]. in the anime, both mugen and jin wanted to help fuu and had some feelings for her and vice versa [though, i always doubted that they were in any way romantic]. from this fic, i got the feeling that it was automatically assumed that fuu loved jin.

anyways, that is how i felt, and that is what i meant. but if you can honestly say that you weren\'t in the least influenced by \'the electra complex\' and all the ideas were your own, i will take it all back and apologize.

First off, I would like to thank everyone for the reviews!! You’re so nice!

I wasn’t intending on posting about them here, but I felt I needed to respond to citrus baby’s comments. I feel the comments were close to accusing me of plagiarism, and that is something I would not do. As I posted this fic, I felt a bit worried that I maybe had unconsciously copied someone else’s work. I have read “The Electra Complex,” it happens to be one of my fav fics here. However, I don’t think that my story and that one are in any way, shape, or form related. Since this is a fan fic, I’m working with characters that are already created, so I think most fan fic’s characterizations, and even character thoughts are going to be similar to a certain degree if the authors want to keep the characters from going too OOC. That said, I believe our Fuu’s are very different and Jin isn’t even mentioned except once at the end. Mugen is almost always the same in most fics that are not AU or OOC. Even so, my Mugen is not so attached to Fuu, (perhaps not yet, though if that happens, I intend on an original way, I swear! LOL). And even the scenes are no where near the same. I don’t have scenes. I have one scene, well, sort of two, but really, they’re all the same place and same time. And the only similarity I could find has to do with water in both fics, but what happens seems a lot different, and I also believe “my” Fuu lacks the bitterness of the other one. Without giving much away for any other chapters I may post, I think it’s obvious where Fuu’s heart will go. Also, to be quite blunt, most of these fics are about making the characters fuck, so, well, all the situations will end up similar! LOL

Anyway, sorry that’s long. Citrus baby, if you would, please point out a little more specifically the similarities of my story to “The Electra Complex” such as actual dialogue, or character actions, because I may have missed in my scan where they are similar. If they’re that similar, I’ll change my story, but I really don’t believe they are.

And sakura, thank you so much for helping out, too! I think it means much more coming from someone else than the author! :D

This fic has many scenes and characterizations and character thoughts from another fic on here, \'The Electra Complex\'. There\'s a bit too many for comfort. If you\'re going to continue, you might want to check that fic out and try to make it a bit your own.

Just because two fics start out the same doesn\'t mean they\'ll end up the same (I don\'t even think they started out that similarly). As for the similar characterization...well, they ARE using the same characters from the same anime. I think this fic is different from \"The Electra Complex\" in that it\'s pretty lighthearted whereas TEC is very very angsty (I prefer the more lighthearted stuff myself). Plus, these two authors have very different writing styles, just a vaguely similar (but also very common) scenario...

That being said, looking forward to the next installment of this \'fic! :D

Please continue. This is the best Mugen/Fuu fic i have read so far.

Wow... It\'s pretty impressive that this is your first fiction. It was a really lovely, lusty, luscious lemon. =D (Alliteration is fun.) Anywayz, I really enjoyed the your fiction. Good job. Keep up the good work... I can\'t wait to read more of your work.

Pretty good. ^^ I enjoyed it.

please please please please continue continue continue continue

Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I couldn\'t tell it was your first fic, so you did something right.
The characters were pretty, well, in character, and I think the reason for them hooking up was pretty
believable. My favorite part was Fuu getting dunked.

Good job, guy!