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i luv this story HOT!!!! plze do more

it was twisted yet i want to read more :-p

Great fic, loved it. And I've seen those pics this was based on. You captured them perfectly!

And fyi, the sitw you gave seems gone, so you can find them a the AGNPH gallery at http://www.agnph.com/gallery/index.php

Got some other great pic that could use a story on 'em.

that website and the picture seem to be gone

Oh please write a sequal!! LOL, this was fucking good! (pun intended) Hell don\'t even use ask as the main charcater, use the baby the charazard is going to give birth to, Just fast forward a few years and make the characzard LOOK like a normal human at a distance. he should have the wings, no horns, no tail, but his hair should be black like cool lava and his eyes a lava red, also a good tan, you working in heat lke that cshould give him one. Then just ahev him go around fucking al the female trainers who so folishly try adn err... ahem, \"taim\" him. LOL I\'m cracking myselfup here! Ok it might b becuase I\'m a \"Little\" drunk but hey! Its a GOOD idea, right?

hi great story i would love to see another chapter so could u please put another chapter on i would love to see what the child is going to look like and i have a vague picture of what anthromorph (charizard) looks like if u are an all right drawer could draw it for me and send it to my email address and while the to were fucking each others brains out where was ashs pokemon and again great fic. my email is josh20_3@hotmail.com bye !

i would like to know how the baby looks and if the dad will see him or her

WOOT I FUKING LOVE THIS FIC MAKE MORE PLZ!!!!!

more! GREAT FIC! Nice lemon too! Keep writing and update soon!

love this fic. I hope you write a part 2 to this fic.