rate_review Reviews

Very nice ^_- It's been a while since you checked on this story, right? You should continue writing it though. It's worth it.

Hot, romantic, good stuff!

Grammar is a good thing, if you don't want to edit, find someone who will. Other than that, really good; the sex scenes are frequent, descriptive, and constructed with a nice amount of perversity. Definitely keep that, in fact, add more! The plot is sex, which makes sense. Mugen and Jin are a little OOC, but that part is up to you. Get some kinky-ness in there, to make it very nice...hot-kinky, not scary-creepy-kinky...what the hell, it's your story, right? The setting is vague and thus slightly confusing and disorienting, so more detail there would be cool. Keep up the good work!

needed to have a better ending... left me wanting more from the characters.

I thought they were in the hot springs. where did the bed come from? oh well. hot stuff!

so much angst! soo beautiful! *tear*

You go girl! I was beginning to think you were never gonna update this story. It was great, and well worth the wait! Hope there\'s more.

Horray! Hot, and believeable. I *hate* uke Jin stories--too out of character, IMHO. Your\'s was great. Don\'t let anyone tell you Jin ain\'t seme! Hope you write more. Great first effort!

it\'s awesome please keep up the wonderful work. i really cant wait to read more!

That was very good...hot O_^ I like the hot spring part the best, heh, but all the scenes were sweet. The underlying emotions add another level to it as well. You portray the characters thought\'s in a smooth way. Plus I think you\'re very in character. Nicely writen, I hope there is more... ^_^