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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful.
You have a gift for taking what so many people may view as fetish (bondage & D/S) and making it completely sweet and understandable. And for that, I am TRULY grateful.
Further, your use of the characters makes me feel like I know them - even though you only tell what you need to in order to further the story. That is a true gift. Often when I\'m writing, I find myself struggling to complete details of what happens in the in-between, when it\'s not really even NEEDED in the story and I would be better off leaving it out. Your knack of knowing what to include and what to leave out is phenomenal.
Keep writing. I want to read more!
Kashu
You have a gift for taking what so many people may view as fetish (bondage & D/S) and making it completely sweet and understandable. And for that, I am TRULY grateful.
Further, your use of the characters makes me feel like I know them - even though you only tell what you need to in order to further the story. That is a true gift. Often when I\'m writing, I find myself struggling to complete details of what happens in the in-between, when it\'s not really even NEEDED in the story and I would be better off leaving it out. Your knack of knowing what to include and what to leave out is phenomenal.
Keep writing. I want to read more!
Kashu
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story ROCKED! I don\'t even know RK, and I love love loved it~
so few people understand well enough to write a sweet bondage story without it being creepy.
this was sweet and sensual and wonderful!
write more, please.
so few people understand well enough to write a sweet bondage story without it being creepy.
this was sweet and sensual and wonderful!
write more, please.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love it!!! i just read it and GOD!! your good! kenshin is sooo steaming hot when he can\'t control himself!!!!!!!!!
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY NICE!!!! IT MAY HAVE BEEN SHORT, BUT THE ENDING WAS JUST RIGHT!!!!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gods that was darn good!
*cheers*
*cheers*
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally loved this fanfiction!!! You did an awesome job writing it.... *sigh* I wish I had my own personal battousai... oh well... lol. Good fic!!! (^-^)
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! you write so good! You have to update more often! totally love this story!
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story a WHOLE lot! It was very well written.
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmmm. verrry good. purrr. ^.^
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice quite hot I really enjoy reading this series. I hope you continue this. Your dialog and spacing is very pleasing to the eye:)