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by psyca

person Rei
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha oh wow cool!!!! i ll see you in the next one!! tell me when i t comes!
person LunaHope
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A sweet sexy little fic that was fun and enjoyable to read. ^_^
person wah
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, I loved it so much. It was very sexy, I hope you write more soon.
person kim
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh i loved it! is there going to be another chapter?
person Zelianyu
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Steamy.....fans self....haven\'t read a lemon taht eated and slow in a while. The two together aren\'t often found. I always wanted to write a scene like that one wheer it was heated and tender in a way...it\'s hard to explain lol. Definatley waht I wante to read. Thanks.
person Kat P
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh you\'re good. Please tell me you will continue this story. I have always enjoyed having a story line behind the lemon.
person Clemen
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very good for your first fic. Great job. I look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care and god bless. Laters.
person Opal Bean
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Reeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaallly Good! Everyone loves the Ol\' possesive Batts! LOL, I hope that Kenshin\'s musings at the end there, are makings for a sequel ^_~?

Looking forward to your next story, you have a new fan!
person Liz
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, good writing :)
person jkeeler
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t review a lot. but i liked your story so much i\'m reviewing. i hope you write about the Battosai\'s little plan.

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