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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Even better you used the lyrics to one of the best songs from the wedding album! I just loved the eroticism in this story, keep it up.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While it\'s good erotic fiction, Kenshin and Kaoru could have been replaced with anyone. The fact that Kenshin even wore a belt makes it seem especially like it\'s not Rurouni Kenshin.
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could do better with a beta\'s help. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes that could be solved, and also, you could get help for the format.
I you want some help, contact us at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders
We\'ll be glad to help you
Firuze
Adult Fan Fiction Beta Readers ML co-owner.
I you want some help, contact us at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders
We\'ll be glad to help you
Firuze
Adult Fan Fiction Beta Readers ML co-owner.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* never thought Kauru would do something like that but heck it\'s not like Kenshins doing anything to move the relationship along, and if he seriously didn\'t like what she was doing he could have left the next day. geez. . . men.
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude, did you just review yourself?
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love you so much,my SFPISPTG!(<-I have you stored in a six-pack under my bed for when i get the late-night munchies for you!)another great story-i feel like i\'ve read it somewhere before?maybe in an e-mail you sent to me or something...?lol. i wuv you!!! ^_^!!
-Bunny-Bunch!
-Bunny-Bunch!