rate_review Reviews

I think I may have commented on this story when you first posted it on livejournal, although I\'m not really sure. In any case, although I usually enjoy fluff and stories with a \'lighter\' tone to them, I did enjoy this one, as well. It\'s somewhat depressing to think of Fai being put in such a situation, but I\'m glad that he finally became stronger in the end. You know what I think would be really great? If you could right another chapter, but this time from Kurogane\'s view. You get a general idea of what he\'s saying/thinking in the story, but I would like to actually see the story from his point of view. That way, we would also understand what the other people are saying, as well. I think it would \'complete\' the story. :) What do you think?

wow. that was very good. i haven\'t gotten to shurac in the manga yet, but i really can\'t wait... but, this story was absolutely gorgeous. it was a wonderful read and i can\'t wait to read more from you. keep it up!

~hanyou-elf