rate_review Reviews

i am never one to stroke the ego. this piece was crudely written, with far too many references to tissue paper and grammatical errors for my liking. your depiction of the sexual acts were poorly written, but you do show promise. i highly enjoyed your portrayal of maromi; very cute. all in all, if you rework the scenario, this could be a good fic in the future. email me if you ever need an honest opinion.

interesting....umm...all I can say is interesting....there really needs to be more fanfiction of this series...

Pretty good stuff ^_^

lol, I love that anime... and I never thought such athing could happen. but at least it\'s a side to lil\'slugger that we get to see. ;)