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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! While his fahter squicks me to no end, i wanna read more! The harsh word sof themother really eserve to isolate Hisoka more, and its oly a matter of time... til what!!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is beautifully written. A few grammar problems, but it\'s still well written, in how much detail and how you write emotions.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know if I shoud say thid or not, but I\'m very reliefed that he died. Maybe everything will get better now? ....But after everything I really cant\'d expect to think that, can I? That\'s what makes your story so great! Anyway, I hope you update soon cause I can\'t wait for another chapter.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so great. I didn\'t read something like this in a long time. It\'s very dark and sad, just what I like. I hope we all can soon enjoy the next chapter!!!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh. Someone\'s review picky. (sticks out tongue) Anyway, interesting chapter. You conveyed Hisoka\'s tone and emotion- of being tired, fed up, exhausted and just flat-out overwhelmed very well- the entire chapter carried his tone. I have no idea what the next chapter is going to be about- I didn\'t have any idea what this chapter would be about. It\'s pretty interesting. Please update so to satisfy all those of us with perverted minds, though this chapter wasn\'t really perverted. (sighs) I am so desensitized. Until next time.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I can\'t say I approve of authors holding their updates hostage for particular review counts, but your work is good enough to warrant one. Lose the verb only has one o, loose the adjective has two. Keep that in mind.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Review whore. Your story is interesting and well-written. Don\'t keep us hanging, write more soon!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You wanted a review; well, here ya go. The first two chapters were so squicky that chapter 3 was kind of a relief. I was glad that poor Hisoka finally died! Sounds like a bad thing to say but after all he went thru, he earned it. Things should be looking up for Hisoka now - he\'ll meet Tsuzuki et al, he\'ll be away from his dad, and he\'ll be able to begin to harness those empathic powers of his (hopefully?). Sounds like a huge plus to me!
Update soon!
Koneko
Update soon!
Koneko
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter I haven\'t been able to get to this site lately so I was thrilled to see that you had updated when I was able to get back on. I\'ll be waiting for the next great chapter but I feel so sorry for Hisoka. You rock Yami no Matsuei fics rock too!
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I personally would like you to continue, but then again, I\'m jsut as insane as you. Muraki is a shit, isn\'t he. Good creepy mentally disturbing chapter- I liked your thing on Hisoka\'s empathy and Muraki\'s suppression of it. It really wouldn\'t be fun for him otherwise, would it. Please no editing.