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by Aline

person chibi-hentai
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good ^^ I liked that. Very hot! I don\'t normally read this pairing but I wasn\'t disapointed. I had a feeling English wasn\'t your first language but you still speak it very well^^. With the exeption of a lack of periods and over dosing the comma\'s, just a few confused tenses, I have to say you write better then most people that DO use english as their first language ^^. Hope you keep writing ^^
ja ne
person aneurysm
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolute greatness. I hope you\'ll keep writing

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