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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so fucking funny I nearly cried from laughing so hard. Hehehe. Great job, I loved it! ^_^
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well written lengthened to the poimt where it is emotional from jovial escalation of revenge to increcdible mind draining suckage. just put in the next chapter what the fuck happens?
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really good make another chapter please
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
duuuu they are in there own personal hells.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Greg, very interesting beginning. I like the interplay between the characters, very believable dialogue, reads like an anime which is cool because it\'s very easy to visualize what\'s going. Of course, since I haven\'t actually seen the anime it\'s really hard for me to judge... but anyway, cool start. ~S
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool!
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was interesting and it made me laugh. A little weird but still good. Update!!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very promising, keep up the good work!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Very good so far, keep it up, this mght become even more interesting lol and see if you can make the next chapter alittle longer ok? well write some more, this is getin good lol
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahahahaah what the fuck LOL