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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Normally I am not a fan of this type of pairing but your "summary" peeked my interest.
As I read on I was quite surprised how well you portrayed the character's as well as keep to there personality.
Of course given the obvious circumstance.
Nothing was rushed nor was it to intense. Meaning the whole "Cock, fuck, cunt" wasn't over done.
To much of that, unless its within a person's personality, simply kills it.
Nothing sounded redundant or to cliche, all of it, in my personal opinion, was very original.
Though keep in mind, I do keep to specific genre's so it could be popular in other series.
It was the first I came across that was so original and very well written, especially for a one shot.
Most I have read are just so needed, to the point, nothing lead up to it except for a characters lust.
Within this story, it was an accident that simply lead to something more. Curiosity very well played out.
I do wish there was some way to record your favorite authors, if there is, then I sadly do not know how.
Haha, ashamed I will be if there is a way and I know it not.
Please continue writing, I will be sure to keep an eye out for your stories in the future.
As I read on I was quite surprised how well you portrayed the character's as well as keep to there personality.
Of course given the obvious circumstance.
Nothing was rushed nor was it to intense. Meaning the whole "Cock, fuck, cunt" wasn't over done.
To much of that, unless its within a person's personality, simply kills it.
Nothing sounded redundant or to cliche, all of it, in my personal opinion, was very original.
Though keep in mind, I do keep to specific genre's so it could be popular in other series.
It was the first I came across that was so original and very well written, especially for a one shot.
Most I have read are just so needed, to the point, nothing lead up to it except for a characters lust.
Within this story, it was an accident that simply lead to something more. Curiosity very well played out.
I do wish there was some way to record your favorite authors, if there is, then I sadly do not know how.
Haha, ashamed I will be if there is a way and I know it not.
Please continue writing, I will be sure to keep an eye out for your stories in the future.
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stomps foot* I demand a second chapter!
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you 8D Ok, not just for the pairing, but for the writing. Well, for everything.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good, despite the PWPness. I mean, yeah, it's pointless smut, and minor and incest at that, but you managed to work in human feelings in there, whereas most fics of that genre would just be "Wham. Bam. Thank you, Ma'am." I like it. Hope you can continue this!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I actually really enjoyed this fanfiction. It is my first time reading a Sakura/Touya pairing, but I was quite surprised. It was very welly written, the choice of words were perfect, and the romance was just beautiful. Bravo, bravo!!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know, at first thought, I figured that this pairing would be really gross... but now I kinda think that it's sweet... you changed my mind about it and I think you, so in other words... you're a really good author, because it's hard to change my mind about anything... thanks... ja ne!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! You need to do another one of this couple! That was very good!
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this I hope you write a part 2 to this.