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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was.. Awesome. o_O I had never even thought of that pairing before, actually. Hahaha. I haven\'t even read that many CCS fanfics either! ^^; It was a great one though, thanks for posting it!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good but a little too short.Why don\'t you write more about this couple?I\'ll wait.Thank you for the fic
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*sighs* you know it makes you wish sometimes incest is not illegal. lol, even tho they have good reasons for it. good story by the way!
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay it was hot! I know that i should not be saying that but hey it was hot!! Anyway the form was a bit wac..1.always double space wne u write 2. Make some indecation when it is a memory or something like that 3. Try not to use that much slang 4. only use the double quotations whne someone is talking 5. use the single like this: \' when they are thinking..okay well i think that is it..good job for a one shot
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Spacing issues noted, and corrected. I had been using \"tab\" to indent my paragraphs like a book would, but it didn\'t seem to come through very well when I cut and pasted. I should have checked. Sorry.
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, if you take away the lemon, you\'re left with a sweet story of a loving sister and brother that actually got better as one read further. Then, your lemon itself was well done. I\'m still working through issues I have of how to write with more detail involving younger characters in one of my fics. Planning more chapters???
I\'d have to say, congrats to you.
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I\'d have to say, congrats to you.
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT!! nice lemon
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! This was really good, a little short but still good. Please, please write a continuation to this. I would really like to see how you develop the interactions between Toya&Saku. I liked this pairing a lot so please continue to write. If you do please e-mail me and let me know. Thanks. ^-^