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for Heaven

by kotay3

person Anon
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story isn\'t bad, sappy, but not bad. You do need to find someone to proofread your work, and learn how to use a spellcheck. You have lots of potential.
person Saka
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how beautiful of a fic. I really liked it. REally beautifully written! \'N it had such a happy ending, at first I thought it was going to have a sad ending. Beautiful work!

~IceAngel~

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