rate_review Reviews

Sooooo great!!!!
Yeah, I know, this story was written years ago, but I just enjoyed it so much, so I really had to write a review =)
There are only few Brad/Ran fanfictions, so I´m always very very happy when I find a new one. Brad/Ran PWP´s are the best^^
And I really really like it when Ran is the seme. Gosh, the lemon was so hot... Ran seducing Crawford, Ran fucking Crawford, and Crawford surrenders... so damn hot!! You´re great at writing lemon scenes... very erotic!
And then the ending... xD
I mean, it´s refreshing to see Ran as the dominant one - and it´s something adorable! Crawford will never forget this night, ne?
So, sorry for possible mistakes in spelling or grammar, English isn´t my first language. Hope you though got what I wanted to say^^
Bye, Layla

Whoo! Damn, you\'re good. Read the first one as well, but was too lazy to comment there heh..but it\'s good.

Oh my what fun Aya and Yohji are having, not to mention Brad and Schuldig. Terrific to see Brad and Schuldig as ukes to Aya and Yohji for once. I look forward to more.

I just wanted to suggest that you consider using a beta for your stories. There are a lot of grammatical errors, including your usage of past and present tenses.
Those errors make it difficult to read your story. They interrupt your story\'s flow.
If you want to find a beta, MediaMiner.org has a forum where people will gladly help you, or just do a Google search for one.