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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a good story, if a bit creepy. . . hehe ^^;
Please continue!!! I will read it!
Please continue!!! I will read it!
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would have thought Zatch would have been the one taking Kiyo but other than that it was a very original idea and I wouldn\'t mind seeing where you plan to take this story too. So please write another chapter.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know if you should remove the flame. I personally wear flames, on this site and others, as badges of honor. It is proof that your writing is good enough to touch a nerve in someone. Also, great story so far.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!!!!!!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
would u update it alllready
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was the kools story in the world!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What possessed you to write this?! Not only is it super-GAY! It\'s nasty to have Kiyo even have sex with a little boy! You are disgusting people if you really think this fic is something to applaud! Come on, butt sex? How repulsive! This author should be maimed by thinking people would like this!!!
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cuuute more plz
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great lemon. He should read the spell again and i guess he\'d have to get older but his \"package\" should get equally as much bigger or more if ya want. Also you never mentioned how big either of them were can you edit it in?
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with the person above me(???) although i liked him better at this age the growing part sounds good.