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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is wonderful... sometimes its these kinda fics that just hit the spot, y\'know? Anyways you have really good grammer in English, just so that you know... and I hope to hear from this fic again... Ja ne
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. this is a really good fic.. I\'m really glad you are translating it. Your english is overall very understandable.. just some issues with tense - if you want a beta reader send me an email I\'d love to help. I can\'t wait to see what happens.. please update soon! I can\'t believe Shu finally left Eiri!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this... you didn\'t make Shuiichi the weak fool (even though he has the tendency to be that-- but maybe not too much hey?) that seems to be the trend in every other fic that i stumble upon... i like that you make their relationship sound real. it\'s nice to read something that keeps the characters \'in character\' but not so much as to make them stereotypical for a change. although i am a little concerned about Hiro\'s part in this story... hmmm... keep it up ne?
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MEE!.. I WOULD DEFINITELY WANT THIS EXCELLENT STORY TO GO ON. PLEASE!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
must have more--keep it up
-american idiot
-american idiot
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue...This is good....
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Though I dont hate the shu*hiro part... WAAAAAAAH.. NO. DONT BREAK THEM UP. NOOOOOOOOOOOOO. UPDATE SOON. AND BTW, UR ENGLISH IS FINE
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good!!! I normally don\'t like stories with HiroXShuichi but for this story I will make an exception. Update soon I have to know what happens!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
stupid stupid shuichi!
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waoo!! good story...keep going, i would be happy to read more...please continue...