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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I totally love your fanfic! It is a sin not to add more chapters!!!! We need more darcia fan fics. . . .
love your story so far! e-mail me when you add the next chapter!
mira
love your story so far! e-mail me when you add the next chapter!
mira
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAH PLease continue...PLease!!!!!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok really realy good start and please make the lemon long please please please please so it will be even better please and if not it will stell be really really good so i don\'t care ether way, but as i sade it would be better that way heh >:D, but thats just what i think heh :D
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What you have is pretty good. The only thing you have to work on is setting. Where is this taking place? Where is the first scene? Try to describe the sights, sounds and tastes of the surrounding enviornment. A little more character development and this will be awsome. Keep it up.
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so happy you did a darcia/cher! I was hoping there would be a little romance there when she was at Darcia\'s stronghold but alas there was not. Please update asap!