rate_review Reviews

That was... WOW... Twisted and compelling at the same time... I'm not sure what to think of this story...

Wow. I thought that it was going to be a tacky story, but I figured I'd give it a shot. It was tastfully done.. and completely well written. I very much enjoyed it. However, i'm a sucker for angst and thus I prefer the Tohru ending. It was good that you did both though, to please all the audience. All in all.. ten outta ten.

the sad vesion made more sense to this sad story

The first ending was expected, and the second was kind of a wrap up on what everyone would have prefered and most the charaters want. So, I guess I like the second one better. Agree with you on the Disney story ending to common. I was wondering about him knowing the curse, not likeing her and making it were she could not do it. That sums it all up nicely for me.

the story was a good one eather ending but you sometimes need to state wich people are saying what. ps. i think you should make a follow up story to this one i'd kinda like to see what would happen.

very good story!i like best the first version!I´m totally Akigure addicted, so i think is very romantic!thank you for writing and i hope you will write more...

i liked the second ending better. way better! i cried and cried when i read the first one.

I must say I prefer the second one since I think they Jyyunshi would all die of grief if their angel Tohru died. I never could fully like Akito, but maybe that's just me. I think Uo and Hana would have them all murdered if they knew Tohru died for the Sohmas. ^^ loved the story, hope you write more.
Lots-O-Love
Sasaki

i liked both endings...but if i had to pick one it would have to be the one where Tohru dies.

not that i hate her or anything, but curses are strange things and to break one means following through on the ritual perfectly. the proxy bit was stretching it as it was, to have Tohru survive would ask too much of Fate and everyone knows that she requires REAL sacrifice to appease her.

i loved your story. it was well-written (not quite a rarity in the fanfiction world, but enough of one to earn you kudos bars and hershey's kisses) and well thought out. keep writing and i'll keep reading.

While this story has made me unblievibly sad, I can truely say/type that I did like it better when Tohru died. Not because it was just the 'plan going rightly into acction' but because one of the most saddest truths in the world is that most very kind and most loving people die horrible deaths. Wonderfuly tuching story, keep up the morose writing- I personaly haven't see much of it, and it's a nice change of pase.

~Miss War-chan