rate_review Reviews

While this story has made me unblievibly sad, I can truely say/type that I did like it better when Tohru died. Not because it was just the 'plan going rightly into acction' but because one of the most saddest truths in the world is that most very kind and most loving people die horrible deaths. Wonderfuly tuching story, keep up the morose writing- I personaly haven't see much of it, and it's a nice change of pase.

~Miss War-chan

Interesting story....sad but very good. Though I think that I'll just trough in my 2cents--Akito can or can't be a s/he, in the Anime "she" is a "HE"- in the Manga "he" is a "SHE"........really I once just got so confused that I called it a chick with a dick and left it at that T_T Putting my insane rammblings beside, I really liked the reading when Tohru dies-it just brings out the good type of drama out.

-+-Benj-+-

*twitchy eye* that.....was.....scary......

I'm sorry but I like the version 2 better... maybe I am a sucker for how sweet Tohru is and all but hey that's my opinion. Tell me if you continue this.

Oh yeah and the change of Akito's character when we learn she is a girl is noticable. The story was amazingly original and I loved it all so much. Tohru would definetly do it all out of love and It made me want to cry. Your an awsome writer.

This was such a great story! Very lemony but terribly sad at the same time!
A very unique way to lift the curse I must say too! Splendid job! I would think a squeal would be awesome

Sadly enough I like the ending where Tohru dies but the one where Akito dies makes more sense!! Keep writing!! Maybe a Kyoru next??

Both endings were good! But I have to say that despite the character change in Akito...I still like Tohru better and they need her more than Akito...plus Tohru is younger and has had her unfair share of hardships as well. So I like the second one better where Tohru lives. But not just because of that but because of how Akito saved her life...it truly made me feel like she was actually a person behind the sadistic bitch mask she always wore and it made me like her a lot more. So i\'d deffinately go with version 2!! Good story...very twisted and a wee bit narsty with the whole beastiality thing but regaurdless I really liked it and it was deffinately original and despite all the sex it wasnt kinky smut...it was actually beautiful and meaningful because you knew she (Tohru) did all those things out of love!! So I really liked it...sorry for the long ass review!

This is an amazing story; it\'s written clearly, understandably, and lacks a lot of the crude language many stories have. The idea is indeed a little......strange, but very clever. And no, I don\'t think you should write a Disney-style ending! I think it works best with Tohru dying, not that I don\'t love her greatly! ;) Thanks very much for writing it! :)

Very goodfic. I think i like the ending where Tohru dies better. Notthat i don\'t like her or anything, i just think it\'s beter.