rate_review Reviews

I like akiko\'s death because it marks a true redemption of her charater and not just another way of using the family.
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This was beautiful!! I love this fic, it made me feel happy, angry and sad. It even made me cry. This was definitively one of the best fics I\'ve read so far, a little short for my states but still very good. About the ending I kind of liked V.1, it was more realistic. Please do consider writing a sequel.

I liked the second ending where Akito died instead of Tohru u.u because Tohru is like the Sohma family\'s adopted sister ^_^ but it would have been nice if you did write a disney ending saving Akito and Tohru =(

i prefered the second ending.

This was a good fic. I really like your plot-line, although I appreciate that you avoided detail at certain parts... it kept the story tasteful in my opinion. Personally, I like the ending where Tohru died more, simply because I don\'t think that Akito would really be one to sacrifice herself and even if she did, it would seem like a cop-out on the story. Not to mention that it puts more risk on the ritual itself as to whether it would work or not, and neither Akito nor Tohru would want that. Anyway, this was great writing and kudos for showing that Akito was indeed a girl!

wow! this is....incredible!! I love it, and it was so believable and there was a really good plot instead of just lemons and smut. you are a very talented writer and I hope to see more of your incredible stories!

*bows*
thank you for acknowledging the fact
that Akito-sama is indeed female....

; ____ ; *cries* It...was so sad....
Is...Kyo dead? Is this the end of the story? O__o ...
Masaka....It can\'t be....*whimper*
Pleaze write more....to fully explain the ending...
(or at least put a note for the bakas like me -____-)