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for Teach Me

by sosha

person Shuichi Shindou
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O wow... just... wow...
person Subby
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To My Wonderful, Gorgeous, Delightful, Insightful, Smart Readers~

Could I lay it on a little more thick? lol

Alright, a few things to address:

Elf, I love you and thank you for your support in every manner.

Shuichi Shindou, I\'m glad you enjoy this so much! Are you also the one who reviewed as just \'Shuichi\'?

Me, uh, well... thanks!

Random Reader, thank you very much! I\'m glad so many people are enjoying this! And their age difference is going exactly how it is in the mangas. Tohma, by his birthday, is 31 years old. Suguru is 16. So, basically, when Suguru is 15, Tohma is 30 and so on. I hope that helps!

Shuichi (if it\'s a different person, lol), thanks! I plan to finish it!

Stephanie, I\'m glad to see you\'re so excited about it!!!!!!! lol, thank you very much for reviewing!

Tamago, I have a funny story for you actually. I loved Tohma to death, but not Suguru. Reluctantly, I took over his part on an RP site I play on to take up the slack. I\'ve always been a fan of Yaoi-cest, but Eiri and Tats were getting old and I shudder to remember the Eiri and Mika one. Ugh. Then again, what else did I expect, clicking something that said: This is wrong. Forgive me, this is so wrong but I had to get it out. Or something like that. So, then I started to realize, Suguru is just a teenager! And it was so fun making him a competitve little brat with a temper to a lust filled uke, who, when drunk, is a little slut (I\'ve too much time to play around with him... sorry. lol). And one day, I got turned on to the idea of Tohma and Suguru. So alike, but so very different. Yum. And here we are with my little fetish fantasy! lol. I do plan to finish it out, I promise! Thank you so much for the support! Ah, \'little cousin\' is bothering you? Well, I\'m sorry, I can\'t change it. One- because I\'m basing this Tohma on how he\'s being played on the RP site, and Two- I think I have a thing for relatives moaning out \'brother\' or, in this case, \'cousin\'. I don\'t know, I\'m just weird. lol

VomitPornStar... uh, can... dear lord, can I ask why you have that as your name?! *blushes* Thanks... I don\'t know if it\'s beautiful, but I\'d like to think it has a nice, full \'story\' quality to it.

Eppy, the masturbation thing was a fluke, really. lol, the plan was, that there was going to be a little oral action in chapter four, be it dream or real, or even... damn, sleepwalking would\'ve work, wouldn\'t it? Man... well, anyway, things got lost in the chapter, things got added, and in the end, this is what we got! Thanks for reviewing!

Yit-Ha, why thank you! I do believe I will.

Nevitari, I will challenge you to a Smut Duel to win title of smut writter supreme! I love smut. TASTEFUL smut, though. I mean, a random fuck one shot is good every now and then, but I like to make the smut have... y\'know, a point? lol. I\'m gonna check some of your stuff in a bit! BEWARE!

So, there you go! Thanks yous made personal! I\'m glad to see you all like this and are having such a good time reading it! I\'m only two pages in to the next chapter, so I dunno when it\'ll be out. Look for \'Reaching Out Through The Darkness\' soon!

Your Little ~

Subby_Dearest
person Yit-Ha
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yosh! Great job on that chappter! I can see the romance peeking through here. Keep up da good work!
person Aly
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I love the smut. Hell, even I couldn\'t tell if it was a day dream or not. Anyhoo, can\'t wait until your next chapter. ^_^ Byes
person VomitPornStar
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please?! i\'ve always liked this pairing and the way you write is so beautiful!
this story is so good ^_^
person me
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
realy great update soon
person Tamago
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I totally hate Fujisaki, but whatever. I can only stand him if he\'s with Tohma, so yay on that! Hmmm... That didn\'t make much sence, did it? Anyway, I like it, and I hope you wont drop it like countless others have with there stories. Keep going, gol-durnit! Ignore that by the way. The thing that bothers me is the \'little cousin\' thing. It makes him sound like hes five or something. STOP THAT! Other then that, great story! 7-10
person steph
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude love your fic so far!!! I can\'t wait to read more!!!!!
person Shuichi
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post soon I love this fic very much so.
person me
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i love where this is going please update soon

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