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I lover the paring for this story it think its adorable!!!!!!!! I cane\'t wait for the next chapters i do hope u update soon!!!

Elf! EEEE!

I remember your reviews!

Oh, they\'ll be the same here as on every other site, I promise. Oh, wow... five days? Really? I didn\'t think I went that fast, man. Well... I have chapter five all done. But, er... I have no idea what I\'m doing in chapter four. I have an inkling, and I may work on it this weekend. It depends on how I\'m feeling.

As you should know, I moved to California over the summer, aaaaaall the way from Jersey. Someone from my school back home died two days ago. I really haven\'t been... inspired. We weren\'t best friends or anything... but it was a small town, and you were part of a huge family back home. It feels like I lost a brother.

But, I promise I\'ll work on it when my inkling starts screaming. Can an inkle scream? Is inkle even a real word? Mrr...

Thanks guys!

Your Little~

Subby_Dearest

Hey, you posted it here! I\'ve already reviewed these chapters elsewhere, but now I\'m curious about something. Will the stories be identical on all of the sites, or will you have edited versions?

By the way, I think you spoiled those of us on the other site by posting three chapters in less than five days. I hope the muses are keeping you inspiried, and good luck with writing the rest of this story!

Good GREAT! I loved it. You are an excllent writer. I hope you keep this story up and finish it!

I love it! It\'s really good. Not just tohma and sugie doing it and then tohma leaving. I hate those fics! This one is a good start and I will love to read more!

Absolutely wonderful! I love this pairing! It looks like a very nice start to a fabulous story! It\'s really extraordinarily written. Good job!!! I only have one question. How much older are you making Tohma, like compared to Suguru? Is it like 10-15 age difference? I\'m just wondering. Well, good luck on the next chappie and update soon!

good start please update soon