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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow... I'm surprised that you didn't get more reviews for this lovely fic. Probably because it wasn't happy or lusty, but who cares about that. Anywho... i just had to leave you a review. I've read plenty of angsty fics..and yours, by far, is one of the best. I actually could feel the reality of it and it wasn't cheesy or overdone. Good job! By the way, I had a suspicion that Dee's bullet was the one who killed Ryo... as soon as the guy told Dee about the "bullet bouncing" on metal. Damn, the end was so ironic, eh? You made me want to write a despressing fic now! heh heh. I'd be good at it too because I'm such a depressing person, as Rob says. -.- So yeah, enjoyed the fic. You pulled it off very well. *Gives you an Oscar*
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your plot, but the writing is a little off. Grammer and spelling need some work, too. I liked it a lot, overall, and I think you\'re very creative.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
; ______ ; Waiiiiiiiiii.....death-ficcys make me cry...so nice job...*sniffle*