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October 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Quite an interesting story that i hope is someday contnued.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think you should proably continue this fic. i for one think there should be more fanfics of this genre because to many people foucs on obvious pairings thus i can't stand Ash/Misty or May not out of like or dilike but because it's been done to death. i'd like to see Ash with more older women like maybe Flannery,Clair,Jenny or Jessie.
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
is there going to be any more like that that got me off bad ^_^
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this a one shot or are you gonna finish it
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What makes you think this has anything to do with Misty? She is not in the fucking story. Ash does not like that stupid bitch. He is way too good for her.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it, but what will happen when misty finds out?
the sound will get her attention and she can walk in on them!
the sound will get her attention and she can walk in on them!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For a PWP it was good. It could have been more discriptive though. Also for a point of realism Ash should have been overcome by pleasure of having sex so suddenly. I mean if he had never felt it before and was suddenly inside a women why would he be struggeling to get free?
Also one type:
\"She climbed off of him and positioned herself just right to where she could such his young huge cock\"
such should be suck.
Anyway that\'s my two cents.
Also one type:
\"She climbed off of him and positioned herself just right to where she could such his young huge cock\"
such should be suck.
Anyway that\'s my two cents.
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know... you should spend a little more time on the description to make it seem a little more realistic.
Even if you were thinking of a PWP, you could have characterized them much better than you have here. Just a hint!
==Telluba==
Even if you were thinking of a PWP, you could have characterized them much better than you have here. Just a hint!
==Telluba==
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya know.... someone should write a fic where Ash actually goes around fucking all the girls he defeats in pokemon battels..... *evil grin*
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These are the kind I like Ash and Joy. Ash and anyone really. Poeple do alot of Ash and Misty one and I like things that are differnt so keep it up.