rate_review Reviews

Hey there! I don't know if you're still writing this fic... I'm often horribly late in reviewing.. oh well, better late than never, nah?

so. my criticism of your fic at this point: more meat. you could stand to make each segment slightly longer, telling more about the action/plotline and leaving less to the reader to puzzle out. while sometimes it's nice to be able to fill things in on our own, there were a few points where I had to go back and re-read to be able to understand what went on. that detracts from the reading experience.

that's the major point. aside from that, you're doing marvelously! I really enjoy the crossover, it looks like it could really go somewhere. I don't know that much about weiss kreuz, but I like what you've done with the g-boys... even though the character interaction there was fairly limited. that's ok, though, you're obviously focusing on Duo, and it'll be based in weiss's world. so it works.

keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more!

Interesting very interesting. Poor Duo though I hope he finds life a little better with Wiess and finds someone nice to heal his broken heart. I was most impressed on how in character you kept them and it was real well wrote. So keep up the good work and please update soon I'm anxcious to know what happens next ^^.Saraba.

Okay, you\'ve just given us this wonderful piece of work and now there\'s no more. Please, I\'d like some more ::puppy eyes::

I love it! Sincerly, this is really not often I read WK crossovers.

i think i read this somewhere
else and had more then one chapter and
feeling of disappoint when it was discontinued so long ago waaawaaa
is this the sameone

Please do continue, it looks promising. Just one ting, if AdultFanFiction.net shuts down, where will you continue to post it?

i loved it, all of it please keep going